Last weeks intensives where actually quite fun, well at least the one I chose was fun. I did the "Fit Chick" intensive along with my whole group of ementry friends... intresting huh? we went on hikes, swag, and did yoga, along with taking a bare esstenails work out class where we also went swimming! besides working out we also learned a bit about body image with the teenage girls, we had a group conversation about it along with watching a movie called "A Girls Life" this film we watched as diffrent girls faced struggles that girls today have to face.
my highlight for this class consisted of just being able to work out with my friends and to feel able to workout with everyone with out getting all embarssied and stuff, it was really fun and cool.
a low light however was that I got there really really late on the first day and It almost effected my abilty to be the intensive I wanted.
If i could choose to do a three day class on something I suposed I would do one on my digs topic, Photoshoped pictures in out media... I think it would be a cool one for younger girls to take because It would be cool if i could teach them that this idolized dream of perfection is unastanable.
my goals for my intisve were,
To be more healthy
To become more happy with my slef
To learn more about working out.
all together I felt I had completed all of these goals, and had a super awesome intenisve(:
Great post! Mostly because I LOVED our intensive! You have a good sense of where to stop one paragraph and start another, but you need to remember to indent or at least skip a line so the reader knows you are starting a new paragraph. It seems as though you had the assignment of paragraph writing in mind in the beginning, but your second two topics were not in strong paragraph structure. Your goals were just listed rather than written in a paragraph. Great thoughts, I just need you to organize them into paragraph structure (Awe, man! It stinks having to follow directions the ENTIRE time!!)
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